Category: Sales gifting

  • What to write in a corporate gift card (12 examples)

    What to write in a corporate gift card (12 examples)

    The card is the cheapest item in any gift box and the one people keep. It is also the part most companies outsource to a template, which is why most corporate gift cards read like a mail merge — because they are one.

    Here is what separates a card that gets a reply from one that gets recycled, and twelve examples you can adapt.

    The three rules

    Name the specific thing

    “Thank you for your partnership” is filler. It could be addressed to anyone, which means it is addressed to nobody. “Thank you for getting security review done before the holidays — that was not a small thing” could only be addressed to one person.

    If you cannot name something specific, that is useful information: you may be sending to someone you do not actually have a relationship with, and a smaller gift with an honest note is better than a large one pretending otherwise.

    Do not include a call to action

    A note that ends by suggesting a meeting turns the gift into an invoice. The recipient can feel the transaction and it undoes the whole thing. Say the thing, sign it, stop.

    Keep it to three or four lines

    Long notes read as effortful in the wrong way. Short and specific beats long and general, and it fits on a card without shrinking the handwriting to a scrawl.

    Twelve examples

    New hire

    Really glad you said yes. The team has been waiting for someone to own this properly and it is going to be a relief to have you. See you Monday.

    Welcome. Nothing here is work-related, deliberately — the laptop comes separately. Start whenever you are ready on Monday.

    Work anniversary

    Five years. You have been here through two rebrands and an office move and you are still the person everyone asks first. Thank you for staying.

    One year in and you have already changed how the team does this. Looking forward to the next one.

    After a close

    Thank you for pushing this through procurement in three weeks. I know exactly what that cost you internally and I am glad it is done.

    Signed, finally. Thanks for being straight with us the whole way through — it made a difference and it is rarer than it should be.

    Client thank-you, no occasion

    No reason for this other than it has been a good year working with you and I did not want that to go unsaid.

    You took a call at 6pm on a Friday to unblock us. That is not in anyone’s job description. Thank you.

    Milestone or hard week

    That launch was brutal and you carried more of it than you should have had to. Take an afternoon.

    We shipped. Thank you for the eleven weeks it took to get there.

    Apology

    We got this wrong and it cost you time you did not have. It is fixed now. Not asking for anything — just wanted to say it properly.

    Sympathy

    I was so sorry to hear. Thinking of you and your family. There is nothing you need to do with this and nothing you need to reply to.

    What to avoid

    • A printed font that imitates handwriting. Everyone can tell, and it makes the whole gift feel automated.
    • The company name in the body of the note. It is on the box already.
    • Anything mentioning next steps, renewals, quarters or pipeline.
    • “On behalf of the entire team at [Company]” — sign it as a person, because a person is who they will thank.
    • For sympathy: any mention of work, deadlines or coming back.

    At volume

    You can send four hundred gifts and still have each note be individual, but only if the messages differ. Send us a spreadsheet column with a line per recipient and we hand-write each card to match. That single detail is what separates a gifting program from a mailshot, and it costs nothing extra.

    If you would rather not write four hundred lines, write twenty — for the twenty relationships that matter most — and use a short shared message for the rest. That is a completely reasonable compromise and far better than four hundred identical templates.

    More on the sending side at client appreciation gifts and employee appreciation gifts.

  • How to write a client thank-you note that actually gets a reply

    How to write a client thank-you note that actually gets a reply

    The reason a thank-you note works is that almost nobody sends them. The reason most of the ones that get sent are forgettable is that they are written like the email they replaced.

    What to write

    Three sentences. The first names something specific from the work, not the deal. The second is small, personal, and probably not about business at all. The third says what you hope happens next — without selling.

    An example. After a renewal:

    Karen — thank you for sticking with us through the integration mess in March. You said something on our last call about your daughter starting at NYU — I hope she settles in well. Looking forward to hearing how the second half of your year goes, whether or not it involves us.

    What to skip

    • The word “partnership.”
    • Anything that reads like a recap.
    • Anything that asks for a referral. (Wait six months. Send another card. Then ask.)
    • Your title under your name. If they don't know your title, the card is not why you're sending it.

    On stationery

    Folded cards are warmer than flat. Cream is more neutral than white. A small logo — on the back, not the front — is fine. A return address is not.

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